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Wrist open like a cave
Blood rushing like the sea
My mind lightens
As my body sets me free

As the floor turns crimson
And my skin fades to white
I feel such relief
Knowing that soon I'll be alright

I shudder from the cold
Feeling death's grip
But I have no fear
As into peace I slip

Smiling to myself
Happy that soon I'll die
No more heartache
Never agian will I cry

As I feel the final beat of my heart
I think of my love for you
You don't want me but death does
I guess now we really are threw
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:iconlooya:
it really is so nice!!

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Summer :heart:
:icondhuff1958:
WOW!!!!

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David Huff
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good or bad wow? xx

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Rooftops and Razor Blades
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thank you and thanks for the fave

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Rooftops and Razor Blades
:icondeath-on-weekends:
thats awesome hunni well done xx

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a wordless poety is empty inside, so hello from my empty shell
:icondhuff1958:
very good....the piece is awesome

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David Huff
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Thanks sweetie xxxxx

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Rooftops and Razor Blades
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thank you very much x

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Rooftops and Razor Blades
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It really reminds me of Jordan's, Paper Wrist. I really like it, you know how to get emotion out there. I love it<3

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Black, Satin Destiny
Enjoy.Erotica@hotmail.com
Your forbidden secrets are mine to know.

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